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[GTA style]

crap

Sorry, i don't like it.
It lags
The characters are tiny
The pick ups (pistol, etc) are bigger than the person. Get the scale right.
Sprites and pngs aren't good man.. you should be drawing all the things in flash.
There was no good music or radio stations.
You didn't gave your game a good name, you just named it.. "GTA Style." Thats like me making a turnbased system game and naming it "Pokemon Style."

W,S,A,D keys would be nice to control the character.
The interface was messy and looked odd.
When i walked, it shows white lines from where you have the tiles apart.
There are no instructions.
I pressed SPACE, and some horrible animation came up with some cheap sound, and then the terrible "screaming" sound that you got from flashkit started playing... "cheap."
The explosions didnt match the quality of the graphics.
You didn't make the graphics.. you copied them from sprites and pngs.
There are no missions
The SOUNDS overlap each other, they really are annoying (especially the screaming sound)
I had an AK47 right away - not much of a challenge, the AK should be a hard weapon to find/buy, not a starter weapon.
Some images were fuzzy, and some were clear. Looks pathetic.
Some tiles dont match up.
Stick to one graphic style..

And, The real GTA series wasn't done by one person. It was done by a large team of professinals, and it didn't take several years.

LeechmasterB responds:

First of this thing is really old, there was a much improved version until my harddisk crashed and it all went to hell. This was not made with as 3.0 but with as 2.0 !

There are no vector graphics used except for menus, its all sprites. And I made 100% of all graphics.
This game is also not finished!
You can remap the keys to W A S D in the options (which you didnt see).
Its an unfinished game, hence no instructions.
There are taxi missions, you just have to get to the right car, and thats about it.
There is not supposed to be much of a challege, its a free ride / cruisin test version of an alpha version of a game.

Like said it was a lot of work and thats the old version of the engine ect. Maybe i ll pick it up again some time.

[Kees' Adventure 2]

Good

I liked it. Its fun, it was addicting as i progressed through and i like the look of the storyline at the momment. I'll be looking out for episode 2..
although it was a little short
but good work!

kcnh responds:

This is episode 2... I assume you are looking forward to episode 3 ;-). Thanks for your review!

[let's make a shooter! 1/3]

Good

I think it was a good tutorial that explained things well. But the only problem is, people arent going to wait for you to post 3 parts on newgrounds. I can do a google search for:
"Flash: Space shooter tutorial" and a tutorial will pop up right away, all the parts there (no waiting for part 2, 3, etc.) and i can download the fla file or just follow the tutorial.
Based on the content of your tutorial though, i think it was a higher standard than one you would find from google.

Genocide responds:

Good luck finding a tutorial that actually explains the code your using on google, friend. Thanks for the comment though.

[A tutorial]

???

Tutorial for what? What type of game? Explain why wer'e using these commands? I dont have a clue what youre doing. Just random code?

SgtBigfish responds:

Look at my game, Howard. I dont know what type of game it is. Also I dont know what the code does EXACTLY, I'm new at coding.